I’ll keep it short, but I think the way you handled 0.7 was spot-on. I really enjoy the buildup, taking things slow and giving each character and story room to breathe makes the big moments hit . And the animation in 0.7 was amazing. keep up the good work

You should do a scene with Kate and then have Liz come in in the middle of it, and then go from there. 

Or do a scene with Helen and then have Liz come in and have her try to compete.

Or do something with Sophia and ami.

I like the first idea best, but that's just me. 😁

You can take it slow fam like seriously no rush here. If you need some rest and time for yourself you can do that as well no complaints from me here. Just remember to take care of yourself every now and then. Stay hydrated now fam. 🫡🫡🫡

As long as you're making progress, you'll eventually get there. Even when you're deleting stuff, you are learning, moving closer to writing something that is worth keeping. 

If you ever feel bad about not being fast enough, remember that people like George Martin and Patrick Rothfuss exist - both unable and unwilling to finish their stories after more than a decade of zero progress. 

In regard to lewd scenes, obviously I'd pick as many as possible - NOT! As much as possible, yes. As many as possible, no. Yes, I said that twice. 

It's a flaw in many harem games that as you progress, the story can't develop properly because there are so many girls, each of them having a sex scene every few minutes. So instead of the story steadily ramping up in pace and tension, it peters out into a slow, constantly interrupted trickle. That's unsatisfying when most of the early game was full of story developments. The issue is further exascerbated by the player's... physical limitations for the number of lewd scenes they can enjoy in one sitting, leading them to stop reading to preserve the scenes when they're still interested in more story. It's better to have fewer scenes, but for those to be longer and better fleshed out.

TL;DR: Not necessarily more scenes, but longer, harder, deeper ones. 

The reasoning for the progress is understandable. I myself am no writer... but I am someone who got himself in to a situation where he's trying to be. I am 380,000+words / 700+ pages in to my sudden compulsion, on a whim, to write a novel.  .... it has taken me .... 4 years.... but I have barely written a THING in about a year and a half now... chronic writers block. 

That is because the passion has ebbed, when the source of the passion waned. I was writing the book, am writing the book, in part, as offer of love, or honouring thereof... and perhaps through my own fickle nature... the person I wished to tribute, means a little less to me now, than they used to... even if I love them still... cos I am bad bad d*ck, or maybe ... probably... just.. man I am having a midlife crisis at almost 50. Yeah probably that. Either way, the passion has waned for the person, and therefor so to, the passion for the writing has with it. 

I share this little personal nugget... because it seems like you have something of a rope to grab, whilst floating in the cold... nonproductive.. waters of the writers block. You have a passion for adult content, the Lewd Moments as you call them. You joke a little about it... seem a little bashful... but friend, DO NOT BE. Embrace that, if you are concerned about any blockages of the writing. THAT is all you need. ONE motivation, one element you can find passion in. Believe me... the writers block will vanish, when you realise that you have to write everything before and after the lewd content, as much as that content, to have something to actually BED the lewd content in. 

As for the poll...  I do not really do social platforms... so I will share my thoughts here too. 

I think the adult content so far IS pretty good, but I think there have been some little issues. I definitely think now, this deep in the game, the MC should now...soon... cross all lines with every woman. There should not be 'Just" small.. as you call them... scenes, in any EP now going forwards, I reckon. They can stay... but as natural things what happen between the MC and a given woman, because they're banging like bunnies :P 

I say this because irrc, there's still one or two we have not gone all the way with even by what, what are we up to, chapter 6? I think it is time for Shimigimmemore to get ... more. And Pseudo-Mommy too. 

As for if something is enough or not... I think quality and nature also matters. If we say the MC goes all in on his women, and his Succubus, like ALLLL in .. the whole three and half inches type in....then once that is established, and those lines crossed.... considering how open they all are to each other with him...save whats her name, the slightly yandere red head... pseudo-sister.... then it would not be unrealistic for our boy to have a lot of 'Small' moments with them... and even if he is taking... a polishing in the bathroom... from one kneeling lady, then a few hours later giving deep digital aid to another in a changing room in the clothes shop... within the narrative of now having established Harem mode... THOSE would be too normal, too expected, to be enough on their own, even if there was half a dozen of them in a episode, you would still need at least one full, top notch scene, maybe even two.. or couple of medium ones. Because once you are that deep with a lover, a sly wristy here, or quick rimmy there isnt even really foreplay, right, just an affordable but amazing gift, that serves as a promise. 

BUT, there is some other things that have been sort of touched on... right? Blondie and Bookworm MFF Fun time... was that not what they discussed with the MC on the bed at teachers house? The fact that Shimmigimmemore posed as Blondies cousin.. and Blondie believes it, and thinks she IS... feels like that is setting up... a more.. taboo... sharing scenario (which actually would NOT be, but that is just clever writing :P).... Pseudo-Mommy has by this point, almost capitulated.... and again, even though she is NOT mommy.. it might be HOT AF if our boy, and she leaned in to it, complete with all appropriate dialogue for such an adult RP moment ;). Also, Teach shows she aint scared at a little exhibitionism. She once rolled with a gang, and the squid bike to prove she a bad girl... perhaps that is indicative of her being more willing now she's crossed that line, to do things... all the things... ANYTHING for our MC... anywhere... not just at night, on a pier at the edge of town... but in broad daylight, somewhere much more central, and with much higher risks of being caught, yeah? Maybe?

Sooooo the thing with all the latter is... with special, hot scenes like that... if you reeeeeealllllllly make them long, well paced, well angled, lit, and well written too, to really milk those angles...as in not just big, but even a bit bigger.. so they're epic....just ONE scene like that, could carry a whole EP. Might still need a few little quick small moments as you call them.. but nothing more... because those scenes... and any other well done, long, hot scene, especially if something related to a kink,fetish, or taboo... that really tickles your lewd content love, and ours too...would be more than enough. 

So I think that is how the best balance is found. Being case by case. A hot full, big scene, with a few phases, might still not be enough to carry an ep alone, even with some small and medium scenes too...  so maybe you do not have so many small or medium ones, and just have another big hot one....  BUT, if that big hot one, turns out to be very big, with a variety of angles, animations, and phases, and it is just about the kinkiest thing the narrative up until that point can justify, or is precluded by sudden shifting narrative to make it almost desperately need happen, so does... then a scene like THAT might well carry the whole EP... you know? 

IDK... maybe I that was all way to confusing...but wanted to give you something since you asked for feedback lol. 

PS Oh one other thing re lewd scenes.. the ONLY think I would urge you keep in mind is ALWAYS, since this AVN, and A is Adult and V is Visual... is ALWAYS, wherever possible.. SHOW do not TELL. That last scene, in current version of the game, with Teach, on the pier? Well, I did find I really was disappointed you told, but did not SHOW the whole thing. We went one round... then end... on screen exposition, saying we F'd all night... then end of game. THAT really SHOULD have been FULLY shown. Not just a pop up which felt almost an afterthought. That is probably my one little pet hate about the game, in fact, that ending. Though I know from the main game page I am not alone in that.